This Elevator Pitch Template Takes You From Invisible to Irresistible!
READ TIME: 4 MINUTES
ISSUE: #004
Ever feel like your elevator pitch is more "meh" than magnetic?
You know the one – the dreaded 30-second spiel where you awkwardly explain what you do, only to see eyes glaze over and watch the conversation quickly die. If that sounds familiar, you're not alone.
In fact, I’ll bet most professionals and entrepreneurs (myself included) have fallen into the trap of describing what we do with something as generic as "I’m a business coach" or "I design websites." But here’s the problem – those labels don’t spark curiosity or make people want to know more.
They don’t make you memorable.
I’m sharing how to craft the perfect, persuasive elevator pitch that’ll not only get you noticed – but make you the person everyone’s talking about at the next networking event!
The Common Mistake Everyone Makes
Most people, when asked what they do, give a bland, label-based response. "I’m a web designer," "I’m a marketing consultant," or "I help businesses grow." Yawn.
These answers don’t trigger any emotional response in the listener, which is exactly what you need for them to remember you.
The brain’s Reticular Activating System (RAS) is constantly scanning the environment for what’s most relevant. If your pitch doesn’t hit on a pain point or unmet need, it’s quickly filtered out. You’ve got 0.2 seconds to make an impact, and trust me, a generic label just won’t cut it.
So, what should you do instead?
Hit It Where It Hurts the Most
To truly captivate your audience, you need to identify the deepest pain or desire of your ideal client.
Here’s a little secret: people don’t buy services or products – they buy solutions to problems they want solved.
Step One: Identify the Pain Point
Think about your ideal buyer’s deepest frustration or desire. What are they struggling with, but too afraid or ashamed to admit? Tap into this raw emotion by asking a question that brings it to the surface.
Step Two: Position Yourself as the Solution
Next, you’ll want to frame yourself as the solution to that pain. Not just any solution, but the one that feels like the miracle cure. The more specific, the better. Make them feel like you’re reading their mind.
See It in Action: The "Before" vs. "After"
Let’s see how this works in action:
Before:
I am a web designer who specializes in designing personal brand websites.
After:
Have you ever felt ashamed of sharing your URL with your prospects because you feel it just doesn’t do justice to your talent and your value?
I’m Mariam, and I design personal brand websites that you’ll wear like a badge of honor—showing the world that you HAVE, in fact, arrived!
Before:
I am a marketing coach.
After:
You know that feeling like you're hanging off the edge of a 20-story building, holding on to that one meager client because they’re barely keeping your business alive?
I’m Adam, and I help startup entrepreneurs generate a consistent conveyor belt of amazing clients and make bucket loads of money—and I do it with a simple 30-minute daily marketing routine.
My Before:
I am a personal branding consultant.
My After:
Do you feel like your expertise and hard work go unnoticed while others claim the spotlight, opportunities, and rewards?
I’m Rahila, a neuropsychologist and I brand people. I help ambitious executives and entrepreneurs use neuroscience-powered strategies to build an influential personal brand and go from best-kept secret to microcelebrity in their domain.
Boom! These revised pitches go beyond the job title. They speak directly to a pain point and position the person as the solution. Now, your listener is engaged and curious – exactly what you want.
How You Can Do It Too
Now it’s your turn.
- Ask yourself: What keeps my ideal client up at night? What are they too embarrassed to admit or too stressed to ask for help with?
- Frame your solution: Position yourself as the answer to that exact problem, using real language and offering a tangible benefit.
- Test it out: Next time you’re in a conversation, drop your new pitch and see how it goes. Watch for the light in their eyes—it’s working when you’ve got them hooked.
🌟 Quick Recap:
- Avoid generic labels. Instead, hit your audience with a question that taps into their hidden pain or desire.
- Position yourself as the solution. Frame yourself as the miracle cure for their problem.
- Test your pitch and make sure it stands out by triggering curiosity and emotion.
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